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marlon (Free verse) by bearhead

We are like gorillas Never looking right at each other ~it might be a threat; Trained circus apes are less obvious than we~ This crazy dance holds all The flavor of bananas. And like a neanderthal I just discovered fire But don't yet have a salve For the burns.

EAger to Offend 2-Aug-03/12:33 PM
What similes, as well. this is fun. I wouln't hold "crazy" against you for this, as it sounds appropriately neanderthal.




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