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Memoirs II (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy

You make me so proud, daughter. And yet, it hurts like that time we finished reading the picture book about Malcom X and Martin Luther King, Jr. You looked up at me with sober blue eyes “Mommy, Why?” I knew when I saw your eyes what you meant, I wiped away the tears rolling down my cheeks to keep your innocent face dry. Like that time that I told you the Neo-Nazi’s were coming and who they hate. You said: “But Amanda has brown skin” and I thought of you and Amanda squished together into the rotating recliner demanding “Spin us – make our ride go”. You decided to come to the counter demonstration wearing a pink sign void of political correctness: “My best friend has brown skin.”

http://mulberryfairy 31-Jul-03/4:46 PM
Thanks for your comments. I am actually working on a series of memoirs about life with my daughter (the poet featured in this story), but they are all still in prosey poetry form. They feature glimpses of the beautiful things I have seen her say and do. She's at the perfect, inquisitive, fairness oriented age of 5 and a half that make her comments absolutely inspiring. Maybe, eventually, I could make it into a story, but I write "poetry" (which you've noticed is more like prose with decent storylines) because I don't have energy with a daughter and a social work job, to make short stories happen.




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