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Pencil Dust [revised] (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

The tune of sorrow speaks of tomorrow in a lampshade casting light on a dark empty street. The sign of defeat painted on the feet of a beggar. His brown coat floats over worn boots; the roots of poverty. His footsteps speak a tale of pale bones that lie lonely in the middle of the road. A young fool goads the old man to a duel of words hung on the cords of electricity hanging across the globe. Beneath the old man's robe is a pen, rusty and covered in a layer of dust. The young man's pocket held a pencil stolen from the school repository.

SupremeDreamer 31-Jul-03/8:24 AM
hey, woah alright, relax.. i can write well, yes, i can, but im not some fucking expert or pro, quite frankly i dont even have a highschool education, my grammar and spelling is shit, and im just starting to write better than my usual teenage angst bullshit. What do you expect? eh? for me to write perfect beautiful masterpieces each time? im WORKING to get to that point man.. im quite happy with my improvement aswell, though i admit, my latest writings are lacking the bang of my usual.. i admit that.




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