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The Rose (Other) by Queen of Tease

Morning dew On a rose bright and new Standing there In it's rose colored wear Velvet soft Is each petal that is held aloft Gentle perfume There for my nose to consume How beautiful Is the rose so lush and full Silent soldier That never seems to get older All eternity It stands there for me.

DurtKL 27-Jul-03/1:09 PM
sweet little poem
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.

"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.

u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry




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