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The Bearded Men (Free verse) by walrus8

Have you all heard About the bearded men? They come with guns From far Phnom Penh! I've got the runs! It's the bearded men! I'll spread the word If you call the UN. The bearded men Will make us cry: They're coming again, And we don't know why. It's the bearded men! I'm really scared! They're coming again, And we're not prepared!

walrus8 25-Jul-03/9:34 AM
I've warned you before! Remember the three questions? To reiterate, they are as follows.

a) Is this an annoying, pointless attempt to ingratiate myself with the adult poetes?
b) Will anyone actually read this, or will it just take up 10 miles of space on comment-recent.jsp because they can see from the first five tedium-ridden words exactly what the rest is going to say?
c) Could I post this on my shitty livejournal instead of defecating it all over Poemeranker?




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