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CrapBeer (Free verse) by DurtKL

Bud Light Brewed with the finest Ingredeints for a Smooth refreshing light taste Contains 12 FL.oz. Of pure shit Flavored Beer This fucker looked at me and said, "Real men drink Irish beer!" As he raised his bottle And chugged down That George Killian's Irish Red. Another fucker said, "Amberbock is the best God damn beer!" And a third exclaimed the virtues Of his MGD. I drained my smirnoff and left.

Caducus 25-Jul-03/8:01 AM
Quality ! I discovered through laughing a brief fountain spurt in my Box area. Loved the end its so fucking sudden like you stormed out in disgust. I could really visualize this and you made this miserable git laugh.

9congrats !




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