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I've lost my poetic edge (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

I can't seem to find it That sense of motovation The drive I've had for most of my life Sure I still see things in a poetic view But I don't know Maybe its just writers block Possibly loss of insperation But whatever it is.. I've been sleeping at night Which should tell you something is wrong I haven't been smoking half as many cigarettes I'm not sitting around thinking Feeling lonely or rejected What scares me most Is that this isn't like me I haven't picked up a guitar in ages Much less howled in furious rage My skin no longer feels like my prison Nor do words flow from my pen Scares me to say it, But I've lost my poetic edge

DreamerSupreme 20-Jul-03/12:11 AM
how much goddamn credit you want? eh? is it really all its about man, the good ole thumbs up? I wrote A Sailors Bottle Message concerning your deserved credit.. creative you may be, indeed.. but does it hurt so much to simply let go and admit: theres more work to be done.. and my furry friend, you got alot of hoppin ahead of you, and i got alot of sailin ahead of myself..




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