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The Umpteenth Home (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

where I broke my fast at the doors of life when the humour of violence spawned sex from a dream whose substance was lucid and hungry for whatever was lost when I found why I left and love always to come back again.

EAger to Offend 14-Jul-03/12:07 PM
I've taken no offence. In fact I've come here for education and don't intend to spurn your help. "Molten arcs" is fantastic by the way and I'm presently working on a poem using arc as an electric/emotional term. Now I have to one-up you on the "molten".




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