Replying to a comment on:

One Morning (Free verse) by Joyleaf

In the soft gray light of morning sneaking in through our window, I saw my beautiful baby. You were tumbled into a pile of blankets, keeping deep brown eyes safe from the mischievous sunlight, long black eyelashes resting against your skin. I stole over to kiss you, heart bursting, and quiety laid a kiss on your cheek. Later, I stood waiting for the train that woud take me away for the morning, that memory lingering. I could feel you against my lips, hear you breathe, and see you, still asleep, wrapped in soft layers of memory. (iloveyou)

kawakurdi 21-Jul-02/10:41 AM
Beautiful description capturing the delicacy of emotion and the
wonder of the moment. Well-done.

(grey not gray}




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001