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Caesar and the Giant. (revised) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

-- Arrogant young self-proclaimed Caesar suffering delusions of granduer did raise his sword to poke a dwarf. Which is in actuality a giant. -Unfortunately- His hallucenagenic suffering did prevent the ability TO: Realize the creatures size and strength. -Suddenly- The giant stirs in irritation. FROM: A burning sensation originating from his arse. -So- The giant turns To see so-called Caesar. -Conclusion- The giant joyfully steps on him thinking of memories which include cockroaches. Upon the insects tombstone the giant did carefully engrave: ~~~Jeremi RGallet~~~ -Settle- Our esteemed Poem Ranker Wanker

SupremeDreamer 2-Jul-03/5:54 AM
My comment continued:

I was surprised and saddened from his poem, because when I first came across his poetry I was impressed with his creative imagination and his amusing humor which is well expressed in his work. He did have a very original brand of poetic writing which horus8 called "twilightpoetry" which is surely the work of a gifted artist.

I won't claim to have more skill or to be more gifted in the art of poetry. Despite my poems story in which i did perhaps arrogantly compare myself to a giant, he most likely has more experience and learned ability then I do currently have.

But his ego and pride seems to have made him into a disgusting brat, who dares to be so elitist to write a poem stamping EVERY poet as a zero:

"Because poetically speaking
You are all
zeroes."

He spits in the faces of the people that did praise his skill and ability.. its shocking. And he then DARES to call himself a "Poetic Hero".

After reading his poem I was enraged and saddened, and felt suddenly sick after thinking about how I did express in my yoda poem the fact that I was impressed with him.

I unfortunely feel that I now must withdraw my earlier opinion about him. Theres more to being a poet than skill and ability, which is character and personality. His character is a sad disgrace to the spirit of the blessed art form called poetry.

He then decided to later attack me with a poem called "SupremeDreamer has a huge vagina" in response I assume to my comment.

I became fucking infuriated to the maximum levels of emotional rage. So I gave the little shit a seven for the nevertheless amusing poem and became inspired to write the poem that is presented here.

Indeed, I did step on horus8's cock when I did dare to stupidly take my arrogance to retarded galaxies and pompously commented on some of his poetry which was an insult to him and the skill he has. My words did do his work a terrible injustice.

I definately deserved the harsh response he did rightfully give me. I still feel deep embarassment and shame from my actions.

But then, I look at settles recent poem.. and I suddenly don't feel so disgusted with myself, and joyfull that I atleast know that I would never be that... I lack the words to describe fully my feelings here.

I'll leave it at that. And I wish to say that whatever happens because of my decision to write this, I do not, and will not EVER regret having written this. Whether praised or insulted, this poem I will cherish as one of the best pieces I've made, despite the likely problems and weaknesses it may have.




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