thepinkbunnyofdoom29 Jun 2003

Your opinion of my style and my style are 2 different things and my poem is what it is, MY POEM. How you feel about it is dandy, but in the end, that doesn't really matter. I made no real attempt at anything other than writing something to amuse myself, which it did, so in the end its purpose was served. There are actually serveral Ideas expressed here, much as you seem not to believe it. One of which being that innocense can be bought (Girl selling her virginity). Another being that being too trusting can end up getting you killed, as well as not knowing your limit (the whole biker, bar, drunk being burnt to death). Another great one being that Everything has a price (dignity). See Ideas, put into a blender with, Creativity, Insanity, A small dose of Humor(which even you have to admit is there at least on some level or else your lying to yourself). Pour into a glass(poetic story form) and You have yourself a niffy little Milkshake I like to call ack basswards or something like that. Muwahahahahahahaha