poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl.

thepinkbunnyofdoom13 Jun 2003

Yes, I think it sounds better but I still don't like the 'A wishful ache' because It seems to me that your saying the momentary release is a wishful ache, when I think it'd go better as 'With a wishful ache'. Still a -9- cause its very good.