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Lachrymalia (Lyric) by Lain

There are ruins deep inside me Of what I can't become, That fire in your eyes Like the fire of the sun. Darker than my passion, Darker than my lust, I feel you burn inside me Like a fever from your touch. You're the phoenix of my ashes, This renaissance of dust. I cannot breathe without this, But it hurts you just as much.

nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Does the title have meaning? I suppose I could do a google search. Hmm. Maybe for lyric poetry I should add a comments from the author field... so you can explain what sort of tune it would be going to... hrm.




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