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Cliche (Sonnet) by Blue Magpie

Cliches are lovely things, I think they say much that a rarer phrase cannot express, and in the common mind, the role they play, is one much filled with beauty and largess. When used discerningly within a verse their nuances of meaning are quite sweet, though writ unthinkingly they are a curse that seldom helps a poet find his feet. The poet who would make their light his own must keep such phrases constantly at hand and close his ears to critics as they moan, then with girded loins pick up his pen and rebel. Finding within a phrase that’s old some image, that while used, is good as gold.

Blue Magpie 29-May-03/8:08 PM
Well actually I won't post it because I have done my three for this week. But here it is.A Rainstorm Over Angelo’s Cafe
(18/5/2003)
To live, is to be part of all that lives.
To feel within your soul the greater beat
of beauty in a world spread at your feet,
and be ennobled by the joy it gives.
The distant hills, greyed by the Summer rain,
the thunder telling tales of hidden might,
the swallows as they flick their magic flight,
the cat watching the sparrows peck at grain,
contribute in their own entrancing ways
to bless the moment and its joyous kiss,
that leaves a ling’ring memory of bliss,
and stirs my mind to symphonies of praise.
A moment’s peace, felt, yet best defined
less by what’s there, than by what’s left behind.






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