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Timing
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INTRANSIT
The tick-tock-tick of the walls, pictures, windows, has me inhaling the stench of sterility while the high point in my eyes blackens the room and definity falls away.
richa
27-May-03/10:16 AM
yes nice feel and structure
Perhaps not ambitious enough though
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