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Aurora & Eclipse (Free verse) by OneFingerAnswer

A glimpse of light, you came into my life Bright, beautiful, spledid, yes but all to fleeting I let the light shine upon me enjoying it And yet the light reflected off me The shine changed me, my visage To all who could see I had changed and yet they never knew The smile, like a trick of light that shows the hairs on a face Never seen before, noticed but unknown Showing up but not to stand out And now that light is gone and yet again the face changes Now in the dimness they still can't see why They don't notice the fading shadow of said smile They never knew of you, For while I basked in your light I eclipsed the truth I hid you as you wanted Now you hide again The light is gone and the shadows have come Now I must become acustomed to the dark once again

OneFingerAnswer 24-May-03/11:57 AM
And I ask you: Are the typos so many and so strong that you cannot get meaning? For that is what a typo riddled poem would be. Are you so distracted by a missing n or a stray comma that you cannot read through it and see something on the other side? Does it raise a question that requires much thought from you? I truely hope you are not so puzzled by a few typos.

And again I ask you: Why not be helpful and point them out? Why instead simply tell of their existence?




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