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The Order Of Things (Free verse) by Mr Pig

I climbed the jagged trellis at the back of the Windmill, Sat in the wheat room to read ‘Wuthering Heights’, I could hear the broken sails move from uneven weight, Tragically oscillating like a pendulum, And on the floor were tabards covered in the ashes of failure, Sweat dripped down my eyebrows slowing its fall, The heat was tangible even at dusk. Outside was the decrepit farmer, Bowing his head at the smell of his jaded harvest, Then hurling his scythe into a glistening carcase. I sat there watching death everywhere, Daytime, harvest, Heathcliff, spirit, But amidst this pain was something spectacular, The sun was bowing to the coronation of night, Absorbed upon candy coloured clouds, That moved like an inferno of chariots. The Farmer called his Sheepdog, And as he ran the corn folded, Jumping up playfully to his unaffectionate owner, But the Farmer beat him back down with a stick. Upon cascading pylons, The Blackbirds took nocturnal residence, As sparrows headed for the solace of sycamore, I thought to myself as I watched in the wheat room, Everything has an order, a balance, And then in the heart of these badlands, As day was given last rites, I drank a glass of Sauvignon, And opened Wuthering Heights.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-May-03/10:57 AM
Well, a lot of people think of me as just a one-dimensional poet who only writes about shallow themes like feces and homelessness. But if you think about it, those are themes that can be very relevant to modern life if portrayed in a mature and responsible way. It's only the people who stop at the surface of my poetry that tend to become angry and confused, when if they'd just open their hearts, they just might find I have some important things to say.

It is indeed sad that we've become so materialistic over the past few years. I remember a time when people cared about core values and simpler truths, but with the advent of violence in the media, and toys made of plastics instead of traditional woods, I truly we feel have lost something important and innocent from the fabric of daily society. Jesu be with you.




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