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This Strange Feeling (Lyric) by snowing

What is it inside me that feels so funny? Feels really furry, like a soft bunny. A feeling that I never felt before But now I want it more and more. A little tingle runs through me Wanting to get out to be free. All this extra energy that I want to let go, A firework of sparks flying high and low. Simething icy cold melted my heart, Is this thing a form of art? Or a heavenly thing sent from above? Could this strange feeling really be love?

kawakurdi 16-Jul-02/2:35 PM
funny, fairy and bunny do not fit with the conclusion of the poem.




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