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Fighting erosion (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

We the wranglands that forever be count the country from sea to sea carry the burden seeds from thee. Standing deeply together shields the pretty wind against us wields audible voices much un-heeled. Wastes deposited deep inside a latent type of genocide bark stands tough as winds deride. Sun to soil in knotted grand as the unknowings reach for hand oh forgive, the Orangutans.

Mona Lisa 6-May-03/5:17 AM
Wow I really loved the imagery in this poem. I was reading the other comments and theres not much clue to the story in this I think I get it but dont want to look a fool. it was lovely reading your poem I am new here on this site and am reading all the top 15 poems in the next few days. I am giving you an 8, nice to meet you and thank you for sharing your lovely poem.




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