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I'm alone (Free verse) by psikosis

Lost my mind, years ago. and now, it's starting to show. I never told you, what I have been through. Lost it all years before. I even opened the door. You never listened. Now my body is glistened. I'm alone, with a gun. I'm alone, havin fun. I threw it all away. But now is a new day. I didn't even know, But now you let me go. Smoking and drinking, was all I was thinking. How could it be true, that now we are threw? I'm alone, with a gun. I'm alone, havin fun.

sliver 29-Apr-03/9:19 PM
Suicide in never an option, I hope you aren't serious
Live is precious-- Love it live it Strive to keep it.




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