poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Awakened by temptalia.

<~>28 Apr 2003

well, there's something about the sky swallowing you whole which betrays the pain you fight through. being swallowed, submitting,--you see what i mean? i feel like you are forged by will, and then you're bait on a hook at the end.

this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end.

(am i ever satisfied?)