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Replying to a comment on:
I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' (Other) by JakeBike
A 'pimple poem' is essentially an ode,
written as an expression of teenage angst.
It is often rhymed--forcedly so--and can be found
scrawled in high school notebooks and on live journals
across the net. Often, it lacks even a hint at rhythm, and
its structure is rarely overly complicated.
By definition, a pimple poem must contain simple,
emotionally/romantically evocative words like 'love' and 'hurt'
and 'ache' and 'night' and 'stars.'
Often laced with odd manipulations of language
(L3Et-5pe4k: 'ur' 'luv' 'l8r' 'ne')
and fraught with common profanity,
it offers a copious use of obvious rhymes
(above/love, eyes/lies, heart/apart)
and little in the way of metaphor.
It is written by the budding poet, for the budding poet,
and is a crucial step in one's development
as a writer of rhymed poetry:
it teaches one what to avoid when composing metrical verse.
(see thepinkbunnyofdoom, katie, blade, Teen14, loneshadow29, Jay J.C.,
JoyfulySlotterdKitty, amalea, little_angel_maria, etc. for classic
symptoms.)
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