Blindproject2172 Apr 2003

Jeez all this suicide stuff gets me depressed. I really like the first verse though, cadacus is right, The chorus is a little long. I have that problem sometimes when Im writing songs as well, mine are either too long or too short, I havent mastered the middle ground. I would suggest asking someone you know you likes writing songs to help you, that always helps with alot of my weak points. But overall pretty good. -7-