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Attention! - To the Wondering Soul (Free verse) by darkhelmet10

The following is a brief message. Think before you act, Do your best at everything you do. Consider how others will react. For, I know the truth. Relax, breathe, things aren't so bad. We're all doing what we think we can, We're all confused, We're all human. For, I know the truth. There is no evil in this world, There are simply inner fires. There is simply greed, There are simply desires. For, I know the truth. We're all the same, We're all completly different. I speak out to you, my generation, Think before you act. For, I know the truth.

poetandknowit

1-Apr-03/7:51 PM

hahahahahahahahaha. No, wait. hahahahahahaha. Are you really that shallow? Do you really follow dogma to the point where you become a brick wall? Because I call you a religious freak, which you are, just read what you write, you assume I am 1) not Christian and 2) agnostic. Do you really know what either of these mean. Where did you learn to sound like a fucking Mormon on a bike? You parents? Sunday school? Because some book? You sound like a confused boy. Your arguments do not even make sense because you have no real idea of what the world is like outside of your home, school, church. So you come up with these god knows what ideas of the world and the current events you see on CNN and how it all work in some wacky moral sense and then you come to a website that is for poetry and start rambling this campy crap you pass for a theology. Sorry. Sounds like a sham in your shallow words.

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