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I Miss You (Free verse) by Birdman42s

I never thought I'd see this day, I never thought I'd feel this way, You...a stranger to me now. I'm left with emptiness... I wish I knew how it could be, That we were once so open and free. You were like my brother.. yet so much more I wish I would have seen what I see now before. For, I did not and it's too late... My friend, my hero once, is now unknown. And what hurts the most is I now know.. What I lost.. and I'm alone. To face a challenge life has sent, And not a moment with you I regret. I just hope one day I can forgive you, my friend.. I miss you....

poetandknowit 26-Mar-03/3:28 PM
No wonder Caducus writes weak poems. Look at the stuff he likes.

Hey, birdman: I miss you, too.




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