poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Fleeting Fantasy by Sawa.

<~>23 Mar 2003

well, what a nice little can of worms you have here.
it's bitter withour being brutal; it uses a cliche here and there, but upends them.

but, somehow, i wanted you to act. you're still a victim, in this piece. stab, or walk, or something!

returning is no panacea: the poem, it dies.