Poemranker [Replying] Thu Nov 21 22:14:27 PST 2024

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Attention! - To the Wondering Soul (Free verse) by darkhelmet10

The following is a brief message. Think before you act, Do your best at everything you do. Consider how others will react. For, I know the truth. Relax, breathe, things aren't so bad. We're all doing what we think we can, We're all confused, We're all human. For, I know the truth. There is no evil in this world, There are simply inner fires. There is simply greed, There are simply desires. For, I know the truth. We're all the same, We're all completly different. I speak out to you, my generation, Think before you act. For, I know the truth.

Blindproject217

23-Mar-03/1:28 PM

I disagree. This world is full of evil, the day you are born you are inclined to do the wrong thing. But thats only true if you believe in absolutes. So many people these days see only grey, they dont believe in right and wrong, and the truth is the more time goes by the more that dark creeps up on us soon the so-called grey will be blackened and well be asking what went wrong. This is why our troops are over there right now, to put an end to evil. While some may say that the motivation is solely greed I disagree(look at my comment on the poem W.A.R.) While none are perfect, the difference is the will to be perfect which seperates us from the rest of the world, we as a nation were born upon the principles and morals of Christianity. And as time goes by we reject it and shove it as far back as possible claiming to be our own Gods, claiming to know all that is important. If we continue to shun wisdom in this country it will be us burning our books in the streets.

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