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Gods Gift of Love (Free verse) by mckenzie

Welcome little one, welcome into our lives our world our family. We can not wait to see you to hold you to smell ur sweet scent. We thank god everyday for the precious gift we are about to receive from above. Your father and I love each other so much we made you and we will love you twice as much . We cant wait until we look into those deep blue eyes. See those rosey red cheeks,and those huge dimples, smileing back at us with all the love in the world. Those courious little eyes wondering what journeys lay behind the door or out in the huge world. Those eyes for us to show. Things like what grows what makes noise,to make you laugh to make you grow. Grow big and strong knowing that you are loved and wanted so much in this life. Mommy and Daddy and Big Sissy can not wait for your arrive our precious gift from God.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 23-Mar-03/6:12 AM
What I was trying to get across is that spelling isn't everything!
Sure its nice but If you can spell excellently but can't convey an image then your poem is going to suck. On the other hand if you can paint that image with your words for the reader to see but can't spell worth a damn your not losing out as much. Yes I am still talking about this poem, The image she lays out is one that is easy to imagine. Plus you can see her feelings of joy and hope for the future. Typos or not its a lovely piece.




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