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Gods Gift of Love (Free verse) by mckenzie

Welcome little one, welcome into our lives our world our family. We can not wait to see you to hold you to smell ur sweet scent. We thank god everyday for the precious gift we are about to receive from above. Your father and I love each other so much we made you and we will love you twice as much . We cant wait until we look into those deep blue eyes. See those rosey red cheeks,and those huge dimples, smileing back at us with all the love in the world. Those courious little eyes wondering what journeys lay behind the door or out in the huge world. Those eyes for us to show. Things like what grows what makes noise,to make you laugh to make you grow. Grow big and strong knowing that you are loved and wanted so much in this life. Mommy and Daddy and Big Sissy can not wait for your arrive our precious gift from God.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Mar-03/5:21 AM
What's that supposed to mean? You don't know how much or how often I think it happens, so you obviously don't know whether it happens more or less than that.

But just so you do know, here is how much it happens: A lot. Here are some things that happen if you can't spell or punctuate:

* You lose marks on tests and exams.
* You can't get a job that requires literary skills (such as "poet").
* People think you are a moron or a teenager or both.
* You will get into arguments on the internet.
* You will become a defensive retard who keeps telling himself that spelling and punctuation aren't important at all, and it's what's inside that counts.

P.S. Although I don't think I know everything, I do think I know 91% of things, which is more than you know. The 9% of things I do not know is in the field of emergency bum surgery.




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