lastobelus17 Mar 2003

Thank you. Please give me more info! Like I said to p&k, this is a "pet poem" for me, such that I'm unable to step outside of it and see where it's broken.

I know it fails, from having watched hundreds of people read it and not buy it (way back in my street poet days) but I don't know how and where.

ha, ha you read at slams a lot so I know you heard the last lines in your head like I read'm.