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squeeze (Other) by kthulah

i'd like to see that that special wrinkle between your brows arched down at the sides i'd like to feel that the sudden inlet of air you gasp when you're overwhelmed i'd like to hear them those filthy phrases you spill online an inch from my ear i'd like to take you to heaven's vices inside my den with walls made of flesh

god'swife 16-Mar-03/1:28 PM
Well at least we have one thing in common, foolish girl, you shouldn't assume so much "not to brag" but my vagina is quite a lovely place to visit. I do a minimum of 1,000 kegels daily, though I've never heard it suggested to do them all at once. Personal I do 100 reps. ten-twenty times daily. Recently it's been more like 30x/day, since it's the only excercise my dear little vagina's been getting as of late. I'll try the 1,000 and let you know, I won't get muscle strain will I? So it seems we have at least one thing in common, I'd venture to say it's much more. Have you read the Tao of Sex by Dr. Stephen T. Chang, it's a gracefully written and insightful book. No one I know has read it, or anything like it for that matter, and I would love very much to have someone to talk to about it. I've also taught classes on sexuality for 10 yrs., so though I can't possibly know everything, I know quite a bit. Have you heard of or done the Female Deer Exercise for the suspension of menstraution? I did it 8 yrs. ago, but when I finally got it to work, I became frightened, and stopped. I don't know anyone who has used it and would like some input.

I have no problem with your poem, the nature of your vagina, or the vagina as a dynamic part of the body. It's really quite ironic because last August when I started participating on this site I got into my first arguement over this very subject. I was defending my pussy along these very same lines, so I feel thanks to you I have come full circle.

Let me apologize for offending you... I'm truly sorry. I only meant to say that I think you're poem could be a little more specific; for example in that last line of you could somehow introduce some of the knowledge or power of your vagina, instead of merely saying 'walls of flesh' that would really be something.
Again, I'm sorry I started this off on the wrong foot, I've been going through a rough spot lately and unfortunately I am only human, and full of frailties, one of them being inconsiderate at times, please accept my apology.






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