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squeeze (Other) by kthulah

i'd like to see that that special wrinkle between your brows arched down at the sides i'd like to feel that the sudden inlet of air you gasp when you're overwhelmed i'd like to hear them those filthy phrases you spill online an inch from my ear i'd like to take you to heaven's vices inside my den with walls made of flesh

kthulah 16-Mar-03/10:54 AM
"Private" would work if by "special" I meant "private".

I meant "special" as in unique to that particular moment (when he's overwhelmed).

As far as the [something], I supposed burrow, rucksack, and a few other orifice implying words would work as far as rhythm, but they wouldn't have quite the same implications as "den".

"lion's den"
"den of iniquity"
"pool table in the den"

I've heard the "stir with the cup" saying before, but from a Chinese lady. I am not Indonesian. I'm an American of mixed ethnicity, but politically identified as Black.




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