poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap.

<~>13 Mar 2003

doing his master's bidding,
middenHeap's into the fray.
oy vey!

I suppose -that- no one really could
--will help the meter

When she over her cradle cooed
--i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly

nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.