poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>.

INTRANSIT11 Mar 2003

I know why sprung is there ,but is'nt it past tense? this is happening now, i gather. Your pace is slowed with commas,while hasting? You're slowing something that happens quickly,yes? that is all. compared to v-1 this works better. lighter.