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if only you could read my mind love (Free verse) by sk8boardandpoems

One plus one equals two it should be me and you Your name sounds like a child so tender sweet and mild How much longer will i have to go without you by me makes me slow I want you right here next to me So we can go away and be free My world has no light without you in my sight I breathe you ,you are my air Sit right here and stroke my hair Hold me in your arms till the end of day To have you here there is no amount i can pay I feel the tears rolling down my face Thinking of why i cant have you in place Every breath i take is like a mistake I miss you ever so much come home soon because you are my crutch.

sk8boardandpoems 10-Mar-03/6:41 PM
I thank you very much for your some what interesting(hopefully) compliment..I usually take to mind in what others say like for instence razorgrin(or something like that) says that in many many words that i am a pieace of shit and that no one cares about me not even my spleen(i got her/him back) and several others who shall remain nameless but after reading your comment that made me think that some people out there(not many) but some of them do care about my work and they appreciate the INNOCENCE of a child and the least the could do as you menchioned(cant spell) in your comment that i am quote on quote 'very BRAVE for entering a forum of expirenced writers'..i only entered this forum becase i wanted some advice and comments from the wise and proven..not someone my age...because someone my age who reads me poems wil say that they are the greatest thing in the world...and thats ok to hear but i would much rather have someone point out my mistakes instead of praising them and not even knowing it...I need alot of help in spelling(hehhe) and maybe some inspirations but after reading your comment that has changed my view of the poetry world...I thank you for taking your time to read it and others and i hope that you enjoy them as much as i do writing them....Thank you




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