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Scars (Free verse) by H0LL0WxL1F3

Scars of pain fill my soul, My tale of frustration has yet to be let out, The crimson blood gathering on my pale skin. Infinitive cruel names reply in my mind, Raging about, searching for the right way out, This is my way of setting my heart free of these emotions. Feeling such as regret also comes through my mind, Forcing my eyes to look at my sad arms, Forcing tears to enter my infected wounds. So here I am, crying on the floor, Observing what high school has done to me, Realizing that I will forever see the sight of scars.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Mar-03/10:53 AM
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42580

Thanks for keeping it real. 10.




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