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Scars (Free verse) by H0LL0WxL1F3

Scars of pain fill my soul, My tale of frustration has yet to be let out, The crimson blood gathering on my pale skin. Infinitive cruel names reply in my mind, Raging about, searching for the right way out, This is my way of setting my heart free of these emotions. Feeling such as regret also comes through my mind, Forcing my eyes to look at my sad arms, Forcing tears to enter my infected wounds. So here I am, crying on the floor, Observing what high school has done to me, Realizing that I will forever see the sight of scars.

H0LL0WxL1F3 4-Mar-03/1:51 PM
Immaturity makes such a good poet like you look bad. As for bringing Durt into this, just because he chose to correct grammer, and I chose to like his poetry, does not mean that it fits anywhere in your comment. Also, I'd like to inform you that the poem is fictional. I do not cut. I could just delete this horrible comment off, but I like critisicm. It feeds my poetry. I'd like the world to see how immature some people can be in a world where we should not have any imaturity. I will not be replying to anything else you say or send to me. I will not be as immature as to post nasty comments on your wonderful poetry. Goodbye.




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