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April Showers (Sonnet) by mindsigns

Touch the sky and bring it down Caress it as your child Be barren no more! Her eyes, pure blue, towards nature's mound Hanging above the the smile From her face the tears pour! So young and helpless, still fearing the world She lets the traffic pass and waits alone! Her body trembles, an open door? All attend a mass Each in hand, a stone.... Empty space, Her beauty bruised Innocence fade, emotions used

mindsigns 19-Feb-03/5:49 AM
hey horus, there is more than one friggin kind of sonnet out there, they aren't all Shakespearian, though I did like yours. Mine wasn an attempt at creating my own style, you can say it sucks but don't say it failed




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