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nightly (Haiku) by <~>

insomnia drifts. listless hours of stolen sleep plagued by ideas.

TanHand 10-Feb-03/1:47 PM
1. I like the punctuation in this one. It isn't gimickey. 2. You're a far better poet than I am, and frankly I'm the last person in the world to critique painting. My paintings are both ceaselessly confusing subtly facetious. 3. I have no idea if you are fat or ugly, and since your web page has barely any content it is impossible to judge your design skills. 4. I like you and I always liked you but what I don't like is your smart mouth.




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