INTRANSIT4 Feb 2003

I was trying really hard to make it Iambic. Iwas'nt sure about the recind either, I'll try too make that bettter. whas wrong with handfull? (many) again Iambic attempt (Ihate filler words but sometimes...) (lingered) 2 syllables? I'm not home and I don't have all the ttols I need damnit. sorry water sans apostrophe is correct in this case. it belongs to the water.
So-Iambic again. sleep-metaphor for quiet. Thanks so much for your time. when I get some myself I'll see what i can do about recind. Fuck, making things smoothe to the ear is hard. It's such a rough world we dlive in eh?