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Until (Free verse) by lunar

I was just a figment of your imaginatination, A speck gathering dust in the farest reaches of your mind, A single fading star in your galexy, You didn't know me at all. The sun comes parading across your thoughts and dreams, Obscuring the night, Covering the darkness with light, Until, like the star in the universe, I drift away until i am gone. I slipped like sand through your fingers, But i have left a black hole, In the wilderness of your soul, You didn't realise what you had until i left you.

T'ien 21-Jan-03/6:25 AM
i would give it 10 but there so cheap and meaningless so i give better than 10 9




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