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The Militarization of America (Free verse) by Quarton

America is becoming an immense arsenal, inside of which there will be nothing. Not a people but an emptiness, an arsenal of nothingness. While our real strengths, compassion and equality, defer to paranoia-- misguided perceptions of the perceived panacea that is militarization. If we continue a policy of guns before butter, neglecting the needy and oppressed in our society; perhaps in the vast repository of bombs, deep in the subterranean chambers of our missile fields, someone in that cavernous silence will remember a poem and recite it. Maybe a young soldier will hum a tune of tolerance and others will join in-- a chorus of hope and equality echoing ever louder, until it becomes a crescendo of love and compassion-- in time to prevent the carnage as the doomsday clock ticks closer to chaos. When billowing mushrooms from spent warheads transform existence to emptiness-- where oblivion resides.

god'swife 20-Jan-03/2:47 PM
You're telling me, not showing me. Which turns important information into useless rhetoric. Our real strengthes? Give me some examples of what you've seen. 'A policy of guns for butter' you'd need more of these concrete examples. Make it more interesting, touch me.




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