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Night Photograph (Free verse) by jess33

I love taking pictures in the earliest part of the evening when the sky is cradling the sunset and the lens captures rays of light that stream through the subjects as their images are invariably thrust onto film. For this moment, silently, visually, fleetingly, they are not themselves, but rather the people they could be. This gives me hope.

pomoxo 19-Jan-03/12:47 AM
nice ideas but they are presented with a total lack of subtlety. especially that last line. i guess its 'honest' but its like you just put this closed idea out there it leaves nothing to the imagination, offers no nuances. otherwise the rest of the poem is pretty good.




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