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The Second World (Free verse) by seebergerb

The red tears of Midgard flood the plains, wash over grass and turn the seas into fire - the gods stand by in ordinary clothes and fill the air with light. My frozen hands grow cold, my mouth is silent - the world around me grows still, the wind slows and the sky is like a stone. Mutiny spreads her silver wings, and sacrifices the alms of mortality on the table of innocence with the pounding of a sceptre.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/2:59 PM
My God. Metaphor AND reification?!?!?! What will you think of next??




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