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The Poem of an Eighth-Grader (Free verse) by jessicazee

I feel sad as a dandelion losing yellowness fast a setting sun, an evening of a flower. Wispy grey hair is all that remains that disappear with a child's weakest breath. Blow and little dead dancers fall, scatter, but it's okay, little girl, the seeds will plant themselves.

INTRANSIT 14-Jan-03/6:35 PM
Middle school genius.




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