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Curse fait (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

The chill still runs through my body When I think about what was there God I had loved and what of it if I still do? Man I still want you I still long for the safety of your embrace I want to know the voice I hear is yours I want to sleep next to you in your bed I want to see your face when I first wake To look into your eyes To know that we belong with each other I still can't help but to see you as perfect It causes me pain to know that I can't be yours I don't know you as I used to I still want you that bad Why can't I just have you Though I know it would be better off If I were to accept you as my friend I know that you don't want to change that. It's time that I move on and yet my feet are weary I want to forget what I felt Just to move away from the pain of knowing That we can't love each other in the same way

ecargo 10-Jan-03/12:35 PM
You sure I'm a baffoon? Not a bassoon or a buffoon? A buffet maybe? No--a bouquet!

Sorry to disillusion you JoyfulySlotterdKitty, but I gave you a two because your poem was juvenile, trite, and completely uninteresting both in content and execution. Nowhere did I "jest at your longing"--I did poke fun at a couple of the comments on it, but so? Get over it.




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