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my life (Free verse) by sir_heff

I die every night My life is a fight The hatred inside just eats me alive hatred of my self and what i cannot find happiness i searched for thats not in my mind it's in front of my eyes but i can not see its out there, in the air but i can not breathe

sir_heff 9-Jan-03/10:42 AM
thats funny, i really liked the last 2 lines. it kinda implyed that my search for happyness is suficating me... but i suspose i could have come up with something better :)




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