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Backwards baby blend (Free verse) by Blade

It stands on the lonely kitchen top, the red juice simmering with friction powered heat. The light flicks on. Slowly, ever-so slowly, large lumps form creating miniture monstrous designs, each joining larger, larger. The features arise to the faceless head of crimson distress, Vocal chords hangin down one by one to form a throbbing vibration of noise filled tension, in the air. Then the torso, Then the legs and, soon soft feet rest gently upon the cool hard razor of dispair in the motorized pit. the baby stops in it's cries as it floats, slowly, softly, ever-so calmly, into its mothers arms.

Caducus 8-Jan-03/5:01 AM
Blade is back ! that in itself is poetry. This appealed to my Dr Evil side and I'm off to buy a blender, your pal Ranger says you want this zeroed to the point of death well my friend incase hes wrong here is a 5 it deserved an 8 but if you want zero i will oblige just grunt and its yours.




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