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if she only knew (Free verse) by ChunkyHunkyMonkey

I wonder if she ever knew i loved her? For every little thing i did to her it didnt matter. I was a fool for ever thinking she was the perfect girl I did everything, I was the typical Prince Charming But to her i was only a plaything I wish i never left her side for I loved her dearly I loved her I alwayz did But for everytime i said I Love You she would say Ditto I wished she would have cared more as I did for her She was my true Angel but later i realized she was my little devil After a while she lost interest and it hurt I asked myself why me why did she leave me? Was it because i didnt love her was it because i didnt care no, it was because she lost faith in me My love was true and strong but hers was just a playful way of saying hi, but that doesn't matter I will go on and live my life the way it should be happy and very enjoyablle She is now a mere thought of the past But one thing remains she will be my first Sweetheart

Another Bobjim?!?! 2-Jan-03/5:50 PM
Ouch. Been there, done that, got the postcard. 9. Bah, I'm upset again now.




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