god'swife1 Jan 2003

"Maybe were just close friends..." til the end ofthat stanza is pretty much the entire poem. "Rough chin" my personal favorite.
I don't believe the more in love the worse the writing. Without inspiration we are lost. It just a matter of seperating the wheat from the chaff.
I serious about that one stanza being the poem. Take all the other stuff away and see if it stands up.